Slasher

As you may be aware, Selena, Ryan, Thando and I have decided to make a movie on the summer holidays. But first we have to write a script. I am happy to inform that one scene is finally complete. :) The scene that was written was by me and it was my opening scene. Not the opening scene of the movie but my first appearance. It is horrody, so yes I almost died but I got away in time. Woops. i just spoiled it. Don't tell anyone. (Shhhhhh!)

Anyway, with one scene done, That means we are getting closer and closer to finishing the script and start acting out the scenes. The script must be done b4 the end of term 4 and with exams coming up, we don't have much time. But, if we put all of our 4 brains together, I am positive that we will complete it.

I will keep you updated.

Dylan

Sam was here 2011 :D
Calvin was here 2011 :D
Peter was here 2011 :D
Ryan wasn't here!
Kristen died!!!!!

Bad luck tuesday!

Today was bad luck Tuesday when my world turned upside down not for just me but the people i love as well. As usual Kristen chased Ryan and me up the stream trying to get a hug of Ryan, Skye was being a bully and Selena was confused. Too make things worse Corey is in hospital with a concussion. In a neck brace and all. I feel sick and I lost money. I also twisted my wrist and it really hurts. And i have a business assignment due date coming up! Today has been bananas.


Now let's get to the few bright sides of the day:
-Mine and Sam friendship is really good
-I have been nominated for Beacon
-I bet Sam, Ryan and Jordan in a game of sorry
-Lucas was saying "Brother" to me
I think that's about all.

Tomorrow wont be much better!
-No Ryan, Jordan and Selena (Bridge Building)
-Kristen will still annoy me
-Sam might not be there
-No book/writers club

Tomorrow good sides:
-Authors coming


Bad Luck Tuesday has even given bad luck to Tomorrow.

Hopefully this bad luck goes away.



Dylan


BTW (By the way): My birthday was on Sunday!

Novel

Bloody Mary is going really good with 1,456 words. Although I am not finished it is going really well. And believe it or not, no one has even died yet. I hope people are eager to read it including popular writer Thando Bhebe. Her blogger is the following link. http://fallenshadowhunter.blogspot.com/ Hopefully my novel will be a sucess.

Signed: Dylan Cohen

Bloody Mary

As most of you know, I have started writing my latest novel "Bloody Mary.' The prologue made Thando cry. Here is a part in chapter 1. Give me bad or good criticism. Thx!

P.S. This is the scene when the main character Kaitlyn tells her friends about her first experience.

Okay. I was 8 and all my friends were sleeping over. We decided to do a little dare night with two teams. My team was wining until the legend of Bloody Mary was told. We were dared to go to the mirror with a lit candle and chant 'Bloody Mary, Bloody Mary, Bloody Mary' while looking at our reflection in the big mirror.My best friend was gutless and rushed in their. The rest of my group including me followed. We chanted and our fate became brutal. (Don't forget we were only 8.) Then I saw a dark black shadow walk across us as soon as we chanted the curse. Then I shivered as the candle blew out as if their were some mysterious wind in the bathroom. I heard a long scratch against the wall and thought to myself, probably just imagining it. Then the candle just lit again by itself. All our reflections showed fear. I reached for the light only too feel someone hold me. I screamed as I pushed the mysterious hand off me and reached for the switch. No one was there. Then all of a sudden the curtain moved. I looked back and opened the curtain with curriousty and fear. But I wasn't too keen to see what was behind the curtain. But I pulled it open. Then all of a sudden, a girl screams boo! And I jump 1000 feet in the air. It was Jamie's girlfriend tiring to scare us. And she did. We felt like fear was taking over our bodies as we stood perfectly still. We were practically petrified. But of course I tried it again 4 years later. And that left a completely different fate! But that's a different story!

Thando Bhebe read this and screamed Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssssssssssss!

Thx For your time!

Dylan

Inkpop!

Here are my other projects on Inkpop. http://www.inkpop.com/projects/94067/mocking-bird/ and http://www.inkpop.com/projects/94065/my-heart-is-empty-without-you-next-to-me-/. I am planning on putting the second book of the series 'The Three Brothers' which is called the shocking discovery. The Three Brothers was a huge hit, with me recieving 17 comments, 6 picks and 4 watches. I have waited to put on the second because i wanted to see how people of inkpop thought. Unfortantly, my second book has been erased so i will have to write it again which is okay because it was the shortest. It was only 4 pages so i will get that done. A month after that i will put the next one on.

Ok! Oh and Ms Burtzynski! Would you mind starting an inkpop and putting comments on all of my projects. The more comments/picks that are on the project that means more people will check it out.

Thx for your time.

Dylan

Inkpop!